You expose your beautiful soul with sweetness and without guile. I enjoyed the natural sweetness of your poem and the deep wisdom threaded within it. I think I shall read it again and again and again...
The most beautiful cento I've ever read! Thank you so much for including me! Reading this felt like brushing fingers over a beautiful piece of mosaic glass💓
Ah thank you so much Sidra! I still remember your list poem and how beautifully it weaved words and a story together! Hope to read more of your poems soon 💓
Such wisdom from a young poet. And then I remember the similarity with my younger self; this is how I wrote too. Cheers for a fellow Mumbaikar being featured! Keep writing, Arshi!
Exquisite, my friend.
You expose your beautiful soul with sweetness and without guile. I enjoyed the natural sweetness of your poem and the deep wisdom threaded within it. I think I shall read it again and again and again...
Oh my god thank you! No I have no words for your beautiful kindness! Thank you for reading and caring and saying this I'm so eternally grateful 💓
And finally, cento no. 4 is up now. Thank you for your interest. Be well. It is here:
https://manjameximexcessive6.wordpress.com/2023/05/27/four-april-centos-no-4/
Here we go, Cento No. 3 is up now:
https://manjameximexcessive6.wordpress.com/2023/05/19/four-april-centos-no-3/
Posted my second cento yesterday, just to let you know.
Thank you for letting me know! Please do lemme know about 3rd and 4th too! Reading this was beautiful. You have a GIFT 💓
Dear Arshi,
Thank you for your final words. I included them in my cento alongside other final Day 30 lines by fellow poets. Please find it here:
https://manjameximexcessive6.wordpress.com/2023/05/07/four-april-centos-no-1/
The most beautiful cento I've ever read! Thank you so much for including me! Reading this felt like brushing fingers over a beautiful piece of mosaic glass💓
Oh my, what a beautiful thing to say. I love mosaic glass. :) I'm so glad you like it. Three more such coming up in May. Always welcome.
Can't wait to read!! 💓
"23 did not bring me wisdom but 23 brought me forgiveness." I love this line, especially as someone who is also 23. Beautiful poem <3
Ah thank you so much Sidra! I still remember your list poem and how beautifully it weaved words and a story together! Hope to read more of your poems soon 💓
Beautiful! I also love trains. I hope to ride one in Mumbai someday. Congrats on being featured!
Thank you! Mumbai lives are beautiful I hope you get to visit too!
A beautiful journey. Congrats on being featured. Keep on travelling!
Thank you! This month has been incredible thank you for all your insights in the past! Meet you again soon I hope!
Congratulations on being the featured poet! I hope 24 does find you with both a different life and a different sense of perception. :)
Thank you!! Can't wait to read more of your poetry soon :D <3
Such wisdom from a young poet. And then I remember the similarity with my younger self; this is how I wrote too. Cheers for a fellow Mumbaikar being featured! Keep writing, Arshi!
- Chandni Girija
Thank you so much for your kindness! I would love love to read more of your poetry <3
Absolutely stunning poem, Arshi! Love the imagery and the tenderness of your thoughts.
Jacquelyn~
Thank you Jacquelyn! 💓